Listen to The Parents
Have
you ever got an accident that changes your life? Well, I had an experience
about accident, and this accident make me learn about the important of parent’s
advice. It happened 5 years ago, when I was in senior high school.
It
was lebaran day; or most of muslim call it by Idul Fitri. It is the biggest
festival in Islamic rituals. Lebaran Day is a wrap-up of Ramadhan, the fasting
month that comes as the finished of Ramadhan. After praying, as usual my
families will gather to visit the other family. We gathered to enjoy delicious
cake and also a glass of orange flavored syrup. Laughing together and telling
about everything that made us happy. At that time, my uncle came to my house
and invited me for a trip to grandma's house. In That moment my uncle
challenges me to ride motorcycle by myself, because several days before I practiced
to ride motorcycle every day. For the first, I was hesitant but I decided to invite
my sister to go with me.
Several
hours later, I prepared and told my parents about my uncle’s challenge. When I
asked permission to my parents, they initially barred. They said that I was
beginner and my grandmother’s house is too far but I still insisted and decided
to go because my uncle called and said that he was waiting at grandma's house. In
short, in the afternoon I immediately went eventhough I am not too familiar
about the signs and I was not sure where the road to Grandma's house but at that
moment I was really brave to go as a beginner rider.
While
on the trip, I ride fast because I felt likes a good rider than my sister who cannot
ride a motorcycle. I will show my skill on ride a motorcycle, without caring
that I was a just beginner to ride a motorcycle. Suddenly, I got a wrong road
and would turn toward the right direction. Unfortunately, when I would to turn
around there was a speeding motorcycle that bumped me and my sister. First, I
did not understand what happened, but after that accident occurred, I realized
the crash, I sit on the floor, and it far from my motorcycle. Luckily, at the
time there are people who help us, because the perpetrators was fled and left
us in the bad condition.
After
that some people help, and check my sister and I condition after a bad
accident. I tried to not back at home. Finally I went to my grandmother’s house
carefully with different speed. I like a beginner who just tries to practice,
because it was slower than before. An when my sister and I arrived, my aunt
asked “what happen with you?” why you look so scare and pale?” in trembling
voice I told what happen with us. I beg to my aunt to did not tell with my
father, but My father suddenly call to my grandmother’s house, he asked about
my sister and I, he asked my aunt “did my child arrived there? She was beginner
rider and I worry she got a bad thing in the way”. My aunt said yes, they
arrived several minutes ago.
At
the end, when I would go home, my uncle followed me at the back. He wanted to
make sure his niece to be safe. At home I told that accident to my parents and
they worried and advice to more focuses and do not forget to pray before going
somewhere. After that until now I am afraid to go to a place without asking
permission to my parents. Because I do not know what will happen if I go
without tell and consult with my parents.
5 komentar:
I guess you to add more ideas in your conclusion. you should write the topic of your essay in the last sentence of your paragraph. but over all is good :)
oke helza, thanks u :)
Pay attention about your grammar, especially in using gerund and possessive pronoun..
Don't forget to put a comma after a transition if it is needed..
nice essay kak...
I think you should give more explanation and giving conclusion :)
Thanks for suggestions guys :)
Posting Komentar