Is It Okay for Children to Earn Money?
Every
people need to interact and communicate with other by using language to
continue their life, and also people who will get good life need money to buy
all of the thing that became priorities, such us for buying daily food,
clothes, book, and home. Money that people need must be get from several ways.
as children, they only ask their parent that will give some money for them, as
adult we should earn money by finding a job and work, but nowadays we can see
that child must do the same work as adults while they should study at school.
Is it okay for children work to earn money? Some people said that it is should
not happen, but there are some people argue and intentionally force their
children to earn money.
The
first reason why parent agree their child to work and earn money is because of
economic crisis. Children can help their parent to complete the thing that
needed to their family. Also children can pay school tuition without ask and
make their parent difficult and confuse to pay.
The
next reason is to teach the child with perception about money is an important
aspect but difficult to get if we do not working hard. When the child understands about this
situation, in the next activity they will think twice to spend their money.
They will choose to buy book than buy a toy. And they will save their money to survive
their life to the future.
On
the other hand, as explain by Convention on the International Labor
Organization (ILO) ; range for working is 18 years and over, people who under
18 years may work but should not harmful, and If there are people who force
children to work, they will be punished Because it
is a kind of exploitation of children and criminal. From that statement we can
understand that ask and force child to work is a kind of crime. It will give
the bad effect for child development. They will easy to get sick because must
work hard. Support with provisions are enforced by a complaint to the Equal
Rights Division within 2 years of the alleged violation that child under 16 may
be work only during certain hours of the day and of the week. People who ask
the child to work is responsible for making sure that minors work
only can do a work
that will not give the bad effect child study, and also they do not do
any difficult work.
Beside,
child will less their time to study at school and would stay away from their
friend. It happens because they should work every day and focus to handle
family finance. This effect also grow the child to be unmanageable because they
think can help family to additional income, so why they should follow their
parent instruction.
Whatever
money is an important in life, children should concentrate with their lesson
and they also can work to earn money and help their parent finance, but the
work must be different with adult work. So they do not pass their time study
and have free time to play with their friend in their childhood.
WORD
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Sources:
·
Accessed Monday, 7th july 2014: http://guetau.com/informasi/manfaat-dan-risiko-anak-bekerja.html . This article tells about disadvantages and
advantages of minor children in working phenomena. Also opinion of Convention
on the International Labor Organization (ILO) ; abut range for working is 18 years and over.
·
Accessed Monday, 7th july 2014: http://sosbud.kompasiana.com/2013/12/01/buruh-anak-sebagai-wujud-dari-sikap-eksploitatif--615639.html.
This article opinion tell about children activity in working in minor age is
one kind of exploitation
·
Accessed Wednesday 9 th july
2014: http://dwd.wisconsin.gov/er/labor_standards_bureau/child_labor_laws.htm.
this article tell about the information “What restrictions are there on the
hours minors may work?,
Where and when can minors work?, Where can I get a copy of the Labor
Standards Complaint form?, What other child labor references are
available?,
and What information about prohibited
employment or work permits is available?”
7 komentar:
wow..the letter using high level :D your essay is interesting. may be you can add the information of children psychology to make your topic more strong.
haha, I have problem with the letter, when I used the small one it will make the other hard to read my essay, so I make it bigger than before :p
try to add one book as your sources about the topic.
it will be better you can search English sources.
it's a good topic..
Thanks for your suggestion ira, next I will add the other information from book.
Your essay is interesting and you also express your idea well... However, you have wrong usages of capitalization on your title of essay...
I think your explanation about your essay is good. but I want you to give more supporting statement in your personal opinions so that it'd be more convincing. that's all. :)
there are some gramatical errors in the first paragraph...
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